As I looked into the mirror
I woke up
And found myself with a broken heart
I realized all those promises
You whispered in my ear
Were all a bunch of lies
I was a fool,
To believe in such things
A fool to think,
Changing my skin
Would be enough for you
Being your slave wasn’t worth,
The disappointment, the humility
You made me crave the desire
Shaped me into something I’m not
What have I become...
The inside doesn't reflect the outside
I can know longer remember who I am
Author notes
"Earthquake! Duck!" You asked for them.
A contest entry
- A whatever emotions contest! by dreamersalwayslive.
600 points, ended January 13, 2008, 28 entries
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Comments
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oh...wow
Quite amazinging my dear! This is beautiful, ina pretty sad way! ANd thanks for following the rules! But for critism a period here and there would be nice, lol.

