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The gurl in my dreams

I dreamt of you almost everynight.

My sleep, plentful;

peaceful at mind.

Forever it seems,

I kept coming back

to the girl from,

my dreams.

I've known you for years,

but never knew your touch.

I've known your heart,

yet never felt it beat.

I watched as you,

went through love and heart breaks.

Wanting nothing more,

then to pick up the fallen pieces.

I'm counting the hours 'til

I hold you in my arms,

never wanting to let go,

never wanting to say good bye.

I am

waiting to call you, myne.

You are my baby.

My missing piece,

It is you, my dear,

that completes me.

You are the girl from my dreams!

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a poem i wrote for my babygirl, whom im asking out tomorrow night at midnight.

Be critical, of my writing, but be true.

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