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Jolly-olly-olly all stuffed with fluff

It's winnie the pooh
And butt luck too
As my little brother tries to sing along
Though he doesn't know the words to the song
There's Eeyore, Piglet and Pooh,
There's Owl, Kanga and Roo
Can't forget my favorite, Tigger
With the tee eye double ger er.
Christopher Robin's story book
Boy I wished to take a look
What a dream if I could
Just wander through the hundred acre wood
This was how it was back when I was young
Back when everything simpley hung
On cartoons and lemonade stands.
But now the world Commands
A balance between dark and light
A simple chance for a darkened fight
Yet it still remains simple and unchanged
One thing will not be rearranged.
In my mind and in my heart
Winnie the pooh is true art
The things I learned from the simple show
Shareing is caring and everything else I know
The memories could never be replaced.
Not by any thing, from Earth or from Space.

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  • storiesuntold gold member
    January 10, 2008

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    Good write here

    Yes indeed I remember so many of the characters you speak of here and loved every one . I am so pleased you are my neice this is wonderful your AP AUNT PATTY
    storiesuntold


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    December 31, 2007

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    awwww this is such a cute and clever write and it made me laugh as i read it. i loved it well done and best of luck


  • opaqueangel
    December 31, 2007

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    Very very cute!!! I really enjoyed this piece and it made me laugh!!! Great job and thanks so much for the entery! Great job and good luck!