Feeling your touch, silent yearning
Other than lust, constant learning
Of your body, we seldom speak
This secret fetish, for your feet
Fellatio pleasure feels right
Easing down pelvis, O so light
This secret fetish, for your feet
Inside you feel, pleasure so sweet
Slowly held, your pedicure kissed
Here with you now, of times I’ve missed
This secret fetish, for your feet
Author notes
Because a well manicure foot is a thing of beauty
In a list
A contest entry
- [GUYS ONLY] Impress Me by Sesheta.
630 points, ended March 30, 2008, 52 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
1 - 9 of 9
-
Ah, this was far too hot! Something I absolutely adored and you took it and made it into such beauty! I loved how you deemed it to be the secret fetish, gives a level of intrigue to it, so to speak. Great job on this one, I liked it a lot!
-
well written
and nice choice of desire, women's feet!
-
-
Thank U so much. Did U catch the Acrostic?
-
-
Intensely written. However, this makes me sad since I'm a dancer and my feet aren't exactly...perfect. Anyways, beautifully written, great imagery.
-
-
Well dancers are like workers so the rough hands of a man holding a woman gently but with an intense harshness still has affection. So kissing the not so perfect feet of a woman isn't that bad
- thank you so much
-
-
Mmmm, Mmmm! Love this one! This was written well and the flow was nice. I thought this was so cute. Keep Writing!
-
-
Thank U. Guess its not a secret any more
-
-
Yes, this is a secret fetish alright....
very well spoken and in mystic detail. I loved it, thanks for sharing, as always it's a pleasure to read such a creation.
ephiphany♥
-
-
Thoughts
-
Adding your comment:
1 - 9 of 9
