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The Gift of Life

Life is a precious gift,
one that should not be overlooked.
We run through each day and forget-
forget to think of all the little things.
We forget to give a hug or just say thank you.

Remember that He gave up His only son for us,
we are here to share our life with others.
Share smiles, love, all that comes our way.
So when it comes right down to it.
Live every moment as though it was your last!

Author notes

1. " To live is the rarest thing in the world. Most people exist, that is all. "
~ George Orwell


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  • Rose Angel gold member
    August 12, 2008

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    You are after my own heart, Seamaiden...Life is to be enjoyed, through smiles, hugs, and our our love...The picture of the baby enforces your lovely words...Great sentiment here, and I agree and support your feelings..Great short write!


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    February 24, 2008

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    Yes!! So true... sometimes we get so caught up in life we forget the great gift we have been given! I really needed this write today, I'm so happy I stopped by.

    A beautiful piece!


  • Cherrylv
    January 28, 2008

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    Well done

    I like this very much, I am a great believer in making each moment count and smiling even when life is hard helps to make the rainbow appear.

    Hugs

    Jill/Cherry xxx


    • seamaiden
      January 28, 2008
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      Yes a smile does help to make the rainbow appear. I love your positive attitude. It is very healthy and good for living life, not just existing as Orwell said in that quote prompt. Thank you for the applause and your words so kind. They are greatly appreciated. seamaiden ♥


  • CherryOnTop
    January 18, 2008

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    Congrats on your HM!! Yes he did give his only son and thank you Jesus.you have written a beautiful poem.

    • seamaiden
      January 18, 2008
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      The prompt spoke to me in this way. I think of how lucky I am to get up each day and walk, talk, see, hear, all those things that most take for granted and I just want to share that with others. Thank you for the congrats, the applause and your words so kind. Much love and blessings. seamaiden ♥


  • natchstucco
    January 9, 2008

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    A most exceptional work done here. So true. I think as poets we are always trying to seek a better life for ourselves through our words. I love to read positive poems , and there are so many negative writes out there, this is a breath of fresh air. well done and congrats on the shiny.

    • seamaiden
      January 9, 2008
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      The quote was my inspiration for this and you are so right about all the negativity we see in the world. It is nice to have a breath of fresh air. I think this background they have for us to use was perfect for this as well. Thank you for the applause and your words so kind. They are greatly appreciated. seamaiden ♥


  • Kari gold member
    December 31, 2007

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    This write was so very precious and sweet. You did a great job on the prompt I wish you the best of luck in the contest
    Happy New Year

    • seamaiden
      December 31, 2007
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      I'm glad you liked it. Thank you for the good luck wishes and your kind words. They are greatly appreciated. seamaiden ♥


  • Poetic Tasha Moderators member
    December 30, 2007

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    vert precious write you have penned
    best of luck in the contest to you

    Tasha

    • seamaiden
      December 30, 2007
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      Life is so precious and this background they have on here is too. Just look at that precious child. Thank you for the applause and your words so kind. They are greatly appreciated. seamaiden ♥

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    December 30, 2007

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    This is very nice and life is a precious gift that should be treausre thank you for sharing I wish you luck in your contest much love

    • seamaiden
      December 30, 2007
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      It is very precious and glad you agree. Thank you for the words so kind and the good luck wish. Much love and blessings for you. seamaiden ♥

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