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Need a human touch

I'm feeling really lonely
And I miss you so much.
I need your arms around me.
I need a human touch.
But I don't ever see you.
You don't answer when I call.
The loneliness is seeping in
And now I'm starting to fall.
I'm scared that I did something,
Something bad to make you leave.
But, God, I miss you so much.
It's getting hard to breath.
Now I'm hyperventilating
And starting to freak out.
I have to breath in deep
Or there'll be another bout.
It's hard to fight back the tears
And this empty lonely feeling.
Come back to me please.
Help me with the healing
Because I've never felt so alone
And I've never wanted you so much.
Hug me, hold me, save me.
I need to feel a human touch.

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It's to a couple people. I'm just so lonely. I have no friends

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  • BAMFNx3
    January 2, 2008

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    Aw Sonya, this was beautiful. I really enjoyed it. You're an excellent writer. And I'm ALWAYS here for you.


  • infernalxfidelity
    January 2, 2008

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    hey! what about me??u have my number! CALL ME! i'll make time for you. i really will. i go work at fucking dunkin dounuts...lol.

    though i must admit...this poem kicks major ass.

    lovelovelovelove you.

    <3julia


  • Scarlet-M
    January 1, 2008
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    Ahhhh!
    This fucking amazing x 1,000,000,000,000,000,000


  • Raging Chaos
    December 31, 2007

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    Im your friend!!! psssh, you went to my party that I didnt know about (lol)


    P.S. awesome poem! it captures your emotions all to well!

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