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Living Without You

Living without you is harder than I anticipated,
My chest is constantly aching for your prescence,
I long to have your arms wrappd around me.
I miss everything about you and I cry.

My days are all a melancholy grey now,
The sun refuses to shine through my curtains.
The house is always eerily quiet with you gone.
I can't seem to shake away the sadness.

I sit in your favorite chair and reminisce,
Laugh about the things we laughed about,
Think about the things we pondered together,
And cry over the things we cried over.

Living without you is taking a toil on me.
The breaths come harder sometimes,
I laying in bed, hoping to waste away into nothing,
And in doing so, find my everything with you.

The days all seem to drag endlessly,
And nothing seems to fill the time.
Nothing can replace the time we spent,
I know this and I don't bother with trying.

Most days when I think of you,
The good outweighs the bad.
But somedays when you cross my thoughts,
I can't bare living without you.

Author notes

I wrote this because i was in one of my moods. I personally haven't lost anyone but it was a refreshing write.Hope you enjoyed it.

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  • BuriedTreasures silver member
    February 11, 2008

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    Excellent

    Very Sincere & Honest--Well written and versed--you have a lot of talent--Please click link if you get the chance!!--> http://allpoetry.com/poem/3879913


  • Claudia Incognito
    December 31, 2007

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    :3
    I like it. It's something that I haven't read about in a while. Everything seems so, oh I'm going to kill myself. And this is...well I guess new for me.

    It really do think it's beautiful and well written. I was reading it, and I randomly started singing it. :3 I dunno, it's unique to me.


  • NicariaLanee
    December 30, 2007

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    OMG!!

    Can you say tears!!! I love this poem and it just shows how you are growing in your writing over the years. My favorite lines would be the last 12 i just love them. You make everything come to life in this poem like sitting in the chair and pondering. You are a genius!! Anyways I love it keep it up.