Muscato
Sweet aperitif subzero
Crème brulee perfect combination
Tart fruity shots burning for all the attention
Post dinner condiment refreshing sensation
Hints of pineapples trace of peaches
Cinnamon fragrances
Sweet kisses
Author notes
one more to my list
Trois-par-Huit (Three-by-Eight or Octa-Tri for short), a poem containing three stanzas of 3, 3
and 2 lines OR 3, 2 and 3 lines: 8 lines total with a syllable count of 3, 6, 9, 12, 12, 9, 6, 3.
The rhyming pattern is AAB BBC CC where the last line is the title of the poem and summarizes
the meaning of the poem. *Note: These poems are to appear center aligned.
In a list
A contest entry
- Form Poetry by Harrisham Minhas.
300 points, ended January 4, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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made my mouth water, sounds inviting and a good time!
Delightful imagery.
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Thanks Mustang!! (who named you that?) JK. I have about three of these. I just love wine. Thanks for reading
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This is wonderfully expressed.
The mention of various tastes is interesting and refreshing.
A suggestion- You can choose some better rhyming words.
For example: Muscato and cold do not rhyme.
Thanks for your entry.
Harrisham Minhas
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thank U. Good c atch. I wish more people would be critical so I can get better and more critical with my writing. I'll look into it. And do my best. Thanks again
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Hmmm
This sounds delicious and and tempting, I may have to try this one out. you do know how to temp me, thank you for sharing and keep them coming.
raingoddess
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Sounds seductively Delicious
Creme brulee...I love it. This had a nice feel to it, from beginning to end in delight of sweet cinnamon kissable fragrances.
Great job
CC♥
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thought this would be tasty!!! thanks
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