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senses

whispers in the wind
scent of the pines
taste of a candy apple
beauty of a sunset
and a dove's touch

song of a bird
smell of sweet harvest
sweetness of pumpkin pie
sight of the sweet august sky
and a butterfly's touch

hearing a melody of a choir
smelling roses in the air
taste of fine chocolates
looking at pure beauty
and feeling your touch

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  • CherryOnTop
    January 7, 2008
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    Tou are so very talented.Keep up the good work.Very well penned and the imagery is superb.


  • paullallady silver member
    January 1, 2008

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    This is beautiful and so descriptive. You have an amazing talent for imagery and it really shows here. I love it! great job on this one.