What is time
But the essence of life
We live in the now
Not the yesterday
Why dwell on the past?
You can not change it
Soar through the sky
Life is too short
Be free from your shell
Take the risk to change it all
Why let time hold you back
You aren’t here forever
Author notes
Not sure if I'm done.
A contest entry
- Free Verse, No Line Limits, Subject - TIME... by Cupcrazy.
1000 points, ended January 15, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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very nice piece with some excellent advice. thanks for this great entry. hugs, bunny
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hmmm I like it a lot actually. You shouldn't change it. Great job
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I think I the end needs more. It feels cut off to me. Maybe it's just me.
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