The distance we share a private admiration
Secretive rendezvous we planned so well
Our illicit desires have no reservation
Broken from this beauty her detached shell
Violet petals are laid before her
Her manicure feet, smiles with delight
Romantic thoughts I’m sure will stir
My plan and wish is to remove her blight
That hides behind this beautiful façade
Moving close my love I shall caress
Her Shattered perceptions I remove the shards
Her heart and mind I will possess
Sweet kisses upon her bosom placed
Her whispers of passion tells of a tale
Of words of desire, and obstacles faced
Her lips I felt, I know so well
Arms wrap tight, to her seductive form
I bathe her body with affectionate attention
Her commitment to him, I feel I’ve torn
These words my love is Pure seduction
In a list
A contest entry
- Match Maker by raingoddess.
875 points, ended January 3, 2008, 7 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - ~Come and seduce me.... by Nature Song.
575 points, ended January 1, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Mmm.. very good poem. Though I'm not into sensual and seductive styles, this is still good, just as a regular poem. I'm more of a darker reader, but sometimes it's nice to read something not excrusiatingly morbid.. and I do really like the last two lines:
"Her commitment to him, I feel I've torn
These words my love is Pure seduction."
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lol...... thanks. I do write dark but not lately. been out of it
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good poem
i like this poem it has a lot of meaning, you put the words together very well. this is diffrent from all of the other poems i read. this i really good. thank you for letting us read your poem. once again great job and thank you .
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thank you so much. appreciate the love
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Yes I agree with Piff this is a winner! Her senuality and your seduction blends the perfect mixture of purple passion. Good Luck. Love this piece!
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Thank U, Purple passion, lol!! thats cool
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Of words of desire, and obstacles faced
Her lips I felt, I know so well...Wonderful lines for this entry! Good luck in the contest ~Sie
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Thanks for seeing my intentions. And thank U
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well done bravo. this is a very well written poem without the porn and all. I am one more for the sensual than the just out and out dirt script. this in one killer poem. best to ya.
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Thank you - I'm not big on hard porn writing but i respect peoples expression. I can get a little raunchy if the contest calls for it but that is not my genre I like to write in. So I thank you so much for appreciating i believe sensual respectful poetry.
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I agree!
Ephiphany is correct. This was excellent.
Your word choices were brilliant and
your images fabulous. A very romantic
and passionate write about clandestine love.
I believe you captured the very essence
of such type of affairs. Nice work
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thank U my friend. It was pretty cool. I had a great muse for this one
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Ok...and the winner is!
This is absolutely Beautiful and HOT all in the same.
Amazing, in so many ways I'm almost speechless in this comment as my hands shiver in excitement.
Thanks for such a wonderful mystery behind this piece.
ephiphany♥
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My pleasure.
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