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Freedom

It amazes me
How I don't dream about you anymore
How something once so big in my mind
Could be gone
It amazes me
That I could learn to care less what you say
That I could imagine
Someone else
To take over me
Like you used to do so very much, so often
I don't think I ever decided if it was something
I loved or hated
You captured me
I would've given you everything
All you had to do was ask
But the question never came
It weakens me
To remember my unrequited love for you
So small and helpless, just a
newborn child,
unwanted and tossed away
It strengthens me
To break away and try the taste
Of something I'd forgotten and could no longer see
Water. Air. Sun. Life.
Freedom.

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  • sexycowboy
    January 31, 2008
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    wow i love it great work