Nights slowly grow darker.
Days slowly grow dimmer.
Breath slows coming out.
And my heart's lost its shimmer.
Feet now can't walk.
Eyes loosing their gaze.
Still it's my own fault.
That my life is a maze.
I reek hell over your life.
So you reek hell over mine.
Me sitting there quiet.
Showing I'm still not fine.
Eternal night has come.
I'm all a flutter.
Darkness covers me.
So now I must shutter.
Bandaid on my heart.
No way to survive.
Looking in my past.
I was never alive.
Without you life is dull.
Without you life is black.
Without you life is nothing.
Without you life will lack.
Walking past me you see.
But no need to say.
The silent talk should tell you.
That I'm still not ok.
Author notes
Username: Zraya218
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A contest entry
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good job
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Excellent
I love the rhyme in this
I actually think it would make a great song.
Can you please put your APname in author notes
I only ask because I don't want to give more than one trophy to one person.
Thanks for entering my contest
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Good luck
Jaz <3
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