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Mesmerized

Hearts beating  so fast,
thrilled to be
together
at last.
All else fades
away..
Both wanting to
forever
stay.

The fragrance of love
fills the air
A passionate kiss..
A caress of the
hair.

There is no one else
around.
Our heartbeats are
the only
sound.
We watch the setting of
the sun.
Our hearts beat
together
as one.

I’m mesmerized.
I'm hypnotized.
This is
intoxicating..
I’m not
hesitating
to say  this
is love.
After all the
waiting,
this is
love.

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  • penman gold member
    January 3, 2008
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    excellent

    Very well done. Great creation so touching and thoughtful.


  • poet2angels gold member
    January 2, 2008
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    So sweet and lovely!
    Magical and beautifully done, like love!
    Excellent poem!

    Lynda


  • paullallady silver member
    January 1, 2008

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    The thrill of new love, of real love. You managed to capture the joy, and lightheartedness of it all. You wording was wonderful. amazing.

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