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A Christmas Poem

 

My Christmas tree was the silent silhouette

of a living redwood thirty stories tall

etched against a silken moonstone haze

that hovered just beyond the canopy


My Christmas star was a double-rainbow moon

settled full above her topmost twig

halos gathered round her shaggy crest

like an omen to the new year nearing fast


My Christmas carols were faintly murmured chants

offered to the stars by giant pines

as I threaded through the darkness past their robes

breathing in their many whispered prayers


My Christmas gifts were solitude and peace

the company and touch of hidden angels

a sense of ease and comfort in the woods

a conversation with the hallowed stars

 

 

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  • wellbegone
    February 19, 2008

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    This is lovely

    My Christmans gifts were solitude and peace. The company and touch of hidden angels. A sense of ease and comfort in the woods. A conversation with the Hallowed stars. Do you remember your conversation?


    • Zahhar gold member
      February 19, 2008
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      yes! we talked of destiny, fate, personal progress, guidance, thankfulness, understanding, and what was that flaring-fading light that just skipped across the horizon?


  • stompsalot
    December 31, 2007
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    beatifully penned

    A gorgeous work! love it. sometimes i wish i could read with my eyes shut. a very soothing write with beautiful imagery.
    Thanks for sharing.
    blessings and *stomps


  • I-Like-Rhymes gold member
    December 30, 2007

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    Would i could share some of these manifestations. But then if someone else where there it would not be as magical would it.
    This poem has a serenity about it that is very pleasing to read.
    Thanks for sharing.
    Jim