Another canvas
covering my heart,
painted daintily
to reflect bliss,
eclipsing the stitches underneath,
as each prick still hurts,
perhaps the pain
is just familiar now.
In a list
A contest entry
- 25 Words Or Less - Prewrites Allowed!!! by xxRainbowDawnxx.
450 points, ended January 2, 2008, 52 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Great imagery. Congrats on winning bronze.
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Thank you dear.
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I know how it is to feel this way sweetie, i feel every ounce of pain for everyone at the moment it seems...because I'm so miserable it feels like its kiling me slowly... I just feel awful. But you beocme used to it, I do...but then something worse happens/new happens and then you have to adjust to that... pain is relative to me now...sorry you feel the same way as I do.
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