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Tarilimous Sqee M.D.

Tarilimous Sqee has a doctor's degree
And certificates up the wazoo
Which he got while he studied by candles he lit
And drank coffee and tea from his shoe

Tarilimous Sqee has a bag full of stuff
That he uses when people are sick
When he prods them and pokes them
And makes them say "ah" while he uses a Popsicle Stick

Tarilimous Squee wears waistcoat and key
To a lock that will open a chest
Where he keeps all his medicine, ointments and creams
That he rubs on his head when he rests

Tarilimous Sqee is a quirky ol' chap
And a fussy old bugger you see
But he fixes what ails ya in spite of it all
That ol' codger Tarilimous Sqee




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Pronounced "Ta-ril-ah-mus Skwee"

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  • Exit-Stage-Right
    November 22, 2008
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    Yes, I've Seen Him Before

    Tarilimous Sqee has so many patients
    to see him you just have to beg
    I showed him the rash on my elbow
    so he amputated my leg!

    Your name caught my eye... I'm trying to find a John Wheeler from USS Monticello back during early '80's. He wouldn't be 58, but I was hoping you might be a relative of a relative who might know his whereabouts, etc.! It's a longshot, but one worth taking.


  • waydownuponjoy
    June 1, 2008
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    Nothing short of good

    medicine contained in this poem of fun & giggles. Thanks for sharing it! joy

  • Lady Silver Dragon
    May 30, 2008

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    I agree with everyone. It seems quite the style of Dr. Seuss. But that is an enjoyable thing here, don't get me wrong! Certainly funny and well suited for kids, no matter the age!


  • stompsalot
    February 8, 2008

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    fun read

    this is a super fun read! and definately resembles a dr suess like story. enjoyed!
    you are an awesome talent! i commend you on your very diversified talent.
    blessings and *stomps


  • Alone and Swarmed
    December 31, 2007
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    Hahaha, good for a rythmic laugh, very Doctor Suess like.

  • OhNoChastity
    December 30, 2007
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    Haha, cute. Reminds me of a nursery Ryhme.

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