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Enough

Will I know when I get there
That I'm on the top
or will I spend all my time
thinking I'm still
not enough

Expecting perfection
never enough
always wanting
feeling
comparing
to everyone else

I don't know why
i have such ideals
when there are times
I am happy with me still

And at times I wonder
when I achieve what I want most
the question begs:
Will it ever be enough?

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  • Blueskywonder
    December 31, 2007

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    This is an emotional piece which i can relate t
    Back to topic; WHAT IS TOP TO YOU? let me know so i can help
    A good piece, my smiling friend


    • MissFeisty
      December 31, 2007
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      "On top" to me relates to being in the top of my field. Only problem is I've just decided to get the guts to go after a long held dream of following my creativity. I sing, and I did a musical last year. I'm going to audition for Chicago. *whimpers* LOL So honestly it's not even about being "on top" of my game, but actually entering the contest first! LMAO Thanks for the support, btw. I really appreciate it.