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The Hand

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Don't bite the hand

That offers you love

When no one else seems to understand

 

Don't bite the hand

That lifts you up

When life didn't go as you planned

 

Don't bite the hand

That offers you funds

When you need a little help to get by

 

Don't bite the hand

That wipes away your tears

When your loved one dies and you cry

 

Don't bite the hand

That reaches for you

To accept a sweet message on the phone

 

Don't bite the hand

That squeezes your arm

And invites you to live in their home

 

 

 

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Finish this your way #3

A contest entry

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  • penman gold member
    January 6, 2008
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    Wonderful

    Very well done. Best of luck in the contest.


  • Frogzter gold member
    January 2, 2008

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    SUch a wonderful message in this piece! Profound words and true! Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest! Blessings,

    Frogz~


  • daviscth silver member
    January 2, 2008

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    What a wonderful poem. The imagery is awesome. Thanks so much for posting and all the best to you at judging, Cathy.


  • arafura gold member
    December 31, 2007

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    wisdom...!

    This is a fine poem full of wisdom and commonsense my friend! But sometimes we let pride get in the way! Good luck in the contest!