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Summer Fun

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Cirrus clouds float languidly by

a backdrop of aquamarine sky

emerald green waters stretch on for miles

every face beams with contended smiles



Digging toes into sugar white sand

on the boardwalk a rock-n-roll band

belting out those old 70's tunes

while children play on sandy dunes



Waves calme the nerves as they roll ashore

mother nature begs "Please come explore"

a crab scurries then darts out of sight

a heron gets a fishy delight



I bask in the warmth of summer's sun

brimming with the excitement of fun

a taste of heaven within my reach

on the shores of Pensacola Beach~

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  • sheltered
    January 1, 2008
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    Well rhymed and great imagery.


  • storiesuntold gold member
    December 30, 2007
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    Sounds great

    A lovely playful write sounds like heaven to me


    • Frogzter gold member
      December 30, 2007
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      Thanks so much! It seems like heaven to me also every time I go to the beach! lol


  • Sandwich Massacre
    December 30, 2007

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    makes me miss summer!

    this just put me in heaven! i love this poem! the imagery warms me to the bones and i felt like your words just brought me to pensacola beach! of course, i've never been there, so maybe it looked nothing like the real thing, haha, but it still brought me to a beautiful serene coastal place. to write this in the midst of winter, i commend you! i'll probably have to report back to this poem every once in a while to regain some sanity to get me through this bitter winter.


    • Frogzter gold member
      December 30, 2007

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      THanks for the wonderful comments! Now go have some hot chocolate! lol!

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