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Fair Weather World

Laugh and the world is oblivious.

Cry, you cry alone, and the world
Mocks your pain.

Sing a sweet melody
And they all applaud you,
But a harsh word and you are in exile.

Judge or do not,
But there will always be someone to criticize you,
'Til the very end,
Judge not that you may not be judged.

Perhaps a few will always stand by you,
Hold them close.

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  • daviscth silver member
    December 30, 2007

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    Thank you very much for taking time to post in my contest. All the best of luck to you at judging, Cathy