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no name #9

the sound of a bolt of lightning pierces the air
as the boy and girl walk along without a care
another boring love story begins again
one we expect to get a ten out of ten
but like all tragedies this must end in sorrow
with no promise of a better tomorrow

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Something I wrote back in 2004 but never finished.

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  • MissAnthropy
    January 3, 2008

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    Its simplistic but right to the point. Amazing! You have the ability to say so much with so few words..Best opening line ever!