Don’t bite the hand,
that strums upon
such fragrant petals
to your garden's bloom
and to your thorny stem,
to where such delicate
fingers roam
unfurling essence
sweetly-
that I might smile
and breathe you
in delight
and while we sway
to song and music
unclothe we shall dance
under love’s stars,
and moon tonight.
A contest entry
- Finish this your way #3 by daviscth.
300 points, ended January 13, 2008, 26 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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This is beautiful Mal, soft and sensous and wanting! Wow, if only I could write free verse like this! Amazing! Keep the ink flowing my friend! You have a natural ability to draw others into your world of thought! A delight to read!
Frogz~
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This is so beautiful. Thank you so much for posting in my contest and all the best to you at judging, Cathy
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Leave it to you ,you're such an incurable romantic! To take such a generalized term to softness in love between lovers.When this could have gone in a plithera of oposing directions.
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I agree you did finish it with your words of inspiration as always..good luck in This contest..
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And you have most certinly finished this with your Mally flare of right to the point with magical wording,
So glad I have some time to visit your page,
Love and Light and A very Happy New year ..
Love
Tearz
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