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Profundity




I love you,  
in your infinite captivating kiss,
turns out to be more intense, deep
in seas of your lap, my residence.

in lewd curves, I remember,
the sweat of skin draining you,
of latent pleasure burning,
in your smell.

kissed flavoring of grass,
the fruit of your offering,
strength of cedar dying,
in spilled wish of body.

passion never ends,
scale gentle sweet dream,
the longing in a craze, conceive
the memory into lust
conquer all boredom, fascinates
with joy you brought skies to
sweet port where I find my beloved
in a wide quiet beach, panting
being my last nest.

my soul in communion constantly
in elapsing of the time
in infinite eternity, profoundly
to love you.

 

 

 

Author notes

~spiritualangel~

Prompt: "True love is like ghosts, which everybody talks about and few have seen."
-La Rochefoucauld

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  • Edna Sweetlove
    January 10, 2008

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    Why enter a serious poem into a contest for humourous poems? Very odd approach I must say, but chacun a son gout.


  • poet2angels gold member
    January 2, 2008
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    wow!
    Emotion and imagery is ever present here.
    Beautifully done

    Lynda

  • Sign of the Swine
    December 30, 2007

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    This was beautifully written, so expressive yet serene. You're able to write with an amazing sense of imagery so that I can imagine the love that you have with this person. Nice write.