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Green Eyes

I stare at them all through my green eyes
Sadness is something eyes can't hide
Each has one that is their own
and I stand jealous and alone
Their hearts can be seen everywhere
Their romance soars and chokes the air
Together they look at me without surprise
As I stare at them through my green eyes

Author notes

See its funny cause I have brown eyes. But I'm not referring to my eyes. Jealousy= the green eyed monster

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  • Andiness
    February 13

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    I understand the jealousy thing, urgh I swear I know you after I read this....wow, I can relate so well.

    *Hugs*
    Andi


  • Sandra R Reynolds gold member
    December 31, 2007
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    I have green eyes (Hazels I guess)maybe I'm the green eyed monster LOL. Very good write.

    • Violet Hawthorne
      December 22, 2008
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      thank you...sorry I havent been on in so long...I've been so busy over the year I almost forgot I had an account


  • TheFourSeasons
    December 30, 2007

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    Ah! I like this! Very interesting use of metaphor, very unpredictable... Great work!

    • Violet Hawthorne
      December 30, 2007
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      thanks, originally I was describing a pic which I have to find SOME way of getting on here but about 3 lines in it was really how I felt

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