This candle glowing with softest light
reminds me of our love this night.
With gentle touch and tender tones
you seeped right in to melt my bones.
Our bodies fitted like two spoons
as we made love under glowing moon.
Like the tides we moved in sync
joining in a perfect link.
As we caressed each other's curves
exquisite sensations touched our nerves.
Hearts aflame we joined as one
these feelings are compared to none.
Afterwards in your embrace
I knew this love would not erase.
Together we will always be
in ebb and flow like graceful sea.
In a list
A contest entry
- TEN THOUSAND POINTS OF RHYME (Now 20,000+) Part 6 Sensual by cricketjeff.
1250 points, ended January 8, 2008, 18 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Thank-you to all our prizewinners. A very good standard at the top of this contest, we are seeing many of the same names at the top of each round, it shows you are well rounded and versatile rhyming poets. Over half way now just 3 more rounds where you can enter pre-writes then the grand finale. Get your rhyming and scanning skills honed for writing us the best new rhyming poem since Methusalah was a twinkle in his mother's eye.
Thanks again for entering
Jeff and Sue
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Lovely entry, always great to see you rhyme! Hope you keep doing it in the later rounds.
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Such a sensual look at an encounter with another, the rhyme was flawless as it always is... just beautiful hun, I hope this takes all the gold
Karen
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Nice flow and a meaningful embrace of sensual feelings.
especially the last stanza, good luck
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this is beautifully written and the emotions and rhyme flow throughout the whole poem. well done gran and best of luck
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