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Young heart

No time for sadness to come my way

just a "Big" barrel of fun

before my dad rakes them away

 

falling from the sky with swishy sounds

giant leaves of Red, Orange and Gold

telling me not to ~Ever grow old!

 

The rains should be coming pretty soon

probably in another day or two

and by then, ...I should be about threw

 

But for now "It's play while you can"

for one day you'll wake up and...

this little boy will have become a man! 

 

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  • Sandygram silver member
    December 30, 2007

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    So sweet and beautiful my friend. You have penned such a lovely poem with your words. It brought me a smile. You take care, Sandy


  • Arizona Sunset
    December 30, 2007
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    awwww beautiful! love the pix!