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Incest

Opalescent tears
carve furrows,
Skin of finest china
bleeding at the touch

Tainted memories
jaded dreams,
Spider coated flesh
crawls at the sensation

Mind screaming
NO DADDY!!!
I can't take anymore!
Demons shred the words

All that is left,
Fear and guilt,
Lost in a vast empty world
Numb

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  • CherryOnTop
    January 16, 2008
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    You have really described the horrors of child abuse.Worthy of a gold.


  • Page Shut down
    January 6, 2008

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    Thank you for your entry

    This one is all to personal for me. I was that little girl screaming 'Daddy No MORE' but never did my screams get heard.

    Good luck, I encourage you to keep writing to read and comment.

    God Bless
    Tammy


  • arafura gold member
    January 1, 2008

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    fear and guilt...

    You have done a great job of describing the fear and guilt of the victims of this all too common crime! The tainted memories and jaded dreams are a life sentence. Excellent work!