Enclosed by mighty peaks
I drift along
serene waters,
the sky reflecting
it's azure blue.
My spirit inhales
whispering echoes
from the past,
lives that have
travelled the same road as I.
Within the silence
their stories
ricochet between pinnacles
stretching heavenward,
their murmurings
guiding me along the path
to paradise,
in ripples of
steadfast wisdom.
Within this embrace
the purpose radiates;
I must not waver.
Author notes
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A contest entry
- Send Your Muse On A Journey by Errant Panther.
470 points, ended January 4, 2008, 9 entries
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Comments
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Just gorgeous hun, you have captured my heart with this piece, the images you created were so wonderful and serene, beautifully spoken out loud too... well done on the HM
Karen
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You have captured as what I could only imagine how those who first traveled the silk road must have felt while making this journey through the mountain paths. well done and best wishes.
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this is beautifully written from the picture gran and it holds so much within your words. well done and best of luck
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