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Unchained

Wrapped within this loneliness
It smothers me and fills my mind
As time drags on, my body numbs
A strange comfort I seem to find

The emptiness befriends my soul
And suddenly I lose all desire
To venture out, to leave indoors
Why should I leave my own empire?

Then the voices within grow louder
Telling me this is where I belong
Away from others, on my own
Should I listen? Might they be wrong?

Though whispers turn into shouts
I stop and wonder what has changed
It’s then I start to have my doubts
And decide I will no longer be chained

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  • scorpio rising
    February 29, 2008

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    "And decide I will no longer be chained"


    will no longer be chained....I agree


    You know...its when you let it go that your dreams come true

    Words of wisedom here Miss....I sense you are seeking for yourself....happiness


    I sense that you...with your kindness and keen insight will find your happiness


    Great write



    Keep them comin!



    Much Love!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!