Don't bite the hand that offers you redemption
don't kill away the only salvation you have left
don't appease those willing to repremand you
don't lie awake regretting past mistakes made before [of thought bereft]
staring at the one who always ignored your pleas
wondering how you came to be [forever lost]
so far away [in the darkest night]
from love [warmth and light]
you lost [never to be]
so very [loved in]
long [cease-less]
ago [time again]
falling down
into eternal
abyss of the
sweetest
nothing
you'll
ever
know.
..or
see
xx
x
.
A contest entry
- Finish this your way #3 by daviscth.
300 points, ended January 13, 2008, 26 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Incredible advice and so very true! I like the spiritual route you took with the prompt! This is a great take on it! Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest!
Blessings,
Frogz~
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You did a great job with her prompt and took it alot further i think then anyone else this is excellent Good luck in her contest
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Thank you very much for taking time to post in my contest. All the best of luck to you at judging, Cathy
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