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bleeeep (unfinished)

One spiteful imitation slips
from your intoxicated tongue.
Merciless,
but casual to you, amusing even,
but it swarms throughout me quietly

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  • Lancashire Lad
    January 15
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    well what's been put down so far is quite good! mint mate x

  • I hate when people don't realise they're hurting you. It is up to you to kick them in the shin Are you going to finish this? It actually looks fine how it is, but if you develop it, I wanna see!