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The Feelings I Have For You

Words can't quite describe
My feelings have been turned upside down
Feelings spin in my head and in my heart
Just as beautiful colors swirl and mix
Every time I talk to you
I feel inexpressible joy

Every time I see you a smile stretches wide across my face

The thought of not being able to talk to you

Makes me feel as if a piece of me is missing

Even if we talk for just five minutes

That makes me burst with joy

Every time you talk to me first

My heart skips a beat

A moment frozen in time

I just wish I could freeze a moment when I see you

Capture how I feel forever in a picture

But even a picture couldn't fully describe my feelings

They say a picture is worth a thousand words

But talking with you I could start with just a thousand words

I could talk to you forever

I opened my heart to you

I have never fully opened my heart to anyone

We have been talking less than a month

Yet I feel I can tell you anything

Words will never be able to describe

The feelings I have for you. 

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  • rhondasail
    December 30, 2007

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    Youthful and emotive, bursting with warmth and joy. Lovely write that all can connect to...those who are or ever have been in love and have tried to describe it caught perfectly in the line : "I could talk to you forever", revealing the energy of youth and the joy of hearing the lover's voice...you speak for all here...well done! Peace to you, Rhonda


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    December 30, 2007

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    yes this is the love.,.sometimes it lacks and shorts of words..I can relate it..
    well done..and thanks for sharing such a wonderful poem...