I don't want to cry,
Not again, I don't,
But, no matter, what I say to you,
The outcome is yet the same,
I don't understand what you want me to do,
Let me be scripted to make you happy,
For nothing to you is good enough,
everything is against your word,
some how all your fault,
for some reason I do not understand,
It is you who you think is being punished,
Do you believe your words?
Do you listen to yourself?
What do you really have to say beyond all these lies?
Is it you who cries herself to sleep?
Is it you who is unrightfully unaccepted?
your mind tells you so~
does it not understand the arguments
of those around you?
The words appearing on their lips,
The words you are choosingly deaf to,
Those words. Those words. Those words.
Are the words.
Are the words.
Are the words.
The ones you choose not to hear~
are the truth,
The truth in which you do no know,
The truth you wish that wasn't there.
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This was interesting but shine with too much repeatness like your words flowed good three lines then repeated again in different words maybe a lil structure balance there on shorting it or changing the words around alil would make it better but overall good read
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Thank you for critiquing me. I really need it on prose, I am horrible at it.
Thank you
I'll keep it in mind, I appreciate it!
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This could go to a lover or your parents.I see real talent here.!!
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Thank you for taking your time, and reading my poetry. I appriciate it
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