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How Could I Haved Burned Paradise?

ashes falling from the sky
like snow falling to a barren ground
what seemed like the right idea
to set a blaze to all my memories
piecing together my every thought
      i couldn't help but hope
that a fire would let me escape

how i crave to be like you
lying down in a grave
at peace
in the mausoleum
hiding away
      lost
in the most lonely sort of way

My heart at your feet
unable to beat
faintly-
your muscles contract
hitting my heart
      pain
without love

I'll swim in the ash
of my own demise
I'm grieving
maybe over you
-exactly over you
blood red skies
raining with flesh
      from the hopes
i set a blaze

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