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Don't bite the hand that holds your heart;
keep it close and don't let go.
When wrapped around your pulsing soul,
true love will only grow.

Don't bite the hand that holds the key
to the mysteries of your mind.
Unlock the magick held within
and see what you may find.

Don't bite the hand that touches soft
the core of your very being.
Touch it back with loving care
two hearts joined, go on beating.

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  • Frogzter gold member
    January 2, 2008

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    This is beautiful! It gave me a great heartfelt sense of warmth and I needed that on this bitter cold morning! Best wishes in the contest! Hope you had a great New Year!

    Frogz~


  • daviscth silver member
    December 30, 2007

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    Thank you very much for taking time to post in my contest. All the best of luck to you at judging, Cathy