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Judge Not tthe one who Loves You

Don't bite the hand that carries you up the stairs to your room.
Don't bite the hand that removes your clothes
Don't bite the hand that touches you sweetly.
And never bite the hand that pays you afterward.

Author notes

I personally don't find prostitution appealing, but it always makes for damn good poetry.

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  • Poetryintheblood gold member
    May 15, 2008
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    Thank you for your entry, good luck in my contest, Josie


  • DrunkenRam
    January 5, 2008
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    LOL, remind me to bring my wallet.


  • Frogzter gold member
    January 2, 2008

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    A most interesting take on the prompt... an out of the box look and I like that, my imagination is a bit dull. Best wishes to you in the contest!

    Frogz~


  • daviscth silver member
    December 30, 2007

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    Thank you very much for taking time to post in my contest. All the best of luck to you at judging, Cathy


  • HeavenScent4U
    December 29, 2007
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