(Image Credit: Unknown)
Ghost moon filters,
playing lacy peek-a-boo
through morning blue,
whispering to dreams,
reminding them where they belong.
Pictures parceled
grow hungry for presence,
expanding,
demanding matters be bold,
be told.
Lifting prisms to the sun,
she gently fades to break of day,
...and yet
December wind bites the chill
with her early rise
demanding her foothold be noted.
Author notes
I have read and commented on The Old Apple Tree and
Afternoon Bliss. Will be going back to read more.
A contest entry
- for the poets who think they can write imagery (pw allowed) by abuyi.
1200 points, ended January 24, 2008, 29 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - SAME CONTEST - NEW POETS : YOUR LAST POEM OF 2007 by maa.
555 points, ended January 3, 2008, 15 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Beautiful piece hun, lovely imagery, Graceful and touching. great work
Hugs, Bunny
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a very soothing and graceful poem ... it bestows a gentle serenity to me ... thank you so much for this peaceful message ...
happy new year !
maa
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This is so good.
'Pictures parceled demanding matters be bold, be told"
That was lovely You get a funny bunny!!!
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Excellent
Pamela, this is such a perfectly penned piece of poetry.
Beautifully penned my dear friend.
Well done.
Best of luck to you in the contest.
Keep up with the great work.
Keep on penning.
Thank you so very much for sharing.
*S* Cynthia
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please follow the rules.. i dont want to remove such good writes cause of that..
i like moon and its moonlight, they muse me lot..
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Very good imagery of a December moon. Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest. Keep the pen flowing.
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ah the moon, i usually get the moon playing peek-a-boo in the early hours of morning, usually i get up for a smoke at the window and watch the world for halfan hour when all is supposedly quiet, i say supoposedly cos it never is there is lots going on with birds and bats
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nice!
gave me that "wispy, dreamy" feeling! lots of luck in the contest my friend.
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I like this. You have a way dear wordsmith.
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Beautiful picture in words. Very soft and vibrant. I really enjoyed this write. Best of luck in the contest, my friend.
Lady D
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