why did you tell
how many times did i tell you
to keep on the d.l.??
and yet you can't even follow
that direction
nonetheless any directions
i thought you were my friend
but i can't trust you anymore
i just trust you as my enemy
i hear the whispers in the halls
i see the glimpse of your face
that puppy dog look that will never
work
you keep apologizing,
saying that it slip
honey,something that big can't just
"slip out"
so you think words can slip
out????
well watch as this knife "slip out"
my hands and into your heart
A contest entry
- A Reason To Kill by Girl With Guitar.
600 points, ended February 11, 2008, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
think about your greatest secret and havin it told to the whole school and multiply it by 10
Comments
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Eh. Grammar is an issue, it sounds very choppy. To me, it started sounding like a secret of transgender was told. But I think the heat here is getting to me
Thanks for the entry. It definitely could have been more descriptive as to why you want the murder.
I do like the title though.
♥Bandaid -
good write!!
I understand this
and also nothing ever does "slip out"
NEVER trust a blabber mouth, hun!!!
-Annie
Authore of the "Him and Her" series...
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