I
am
tearing it up
burning it
with tears
I
am
disposing of it
Nefarious words
falsetude,
deceit.....
I
will
regurgitate
all swallowed
sweetness,
all
vile
will disipate
walking tall
proud
a climax
at
the peak
culmination
of
tomorrows
without
you
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Who we are is not identified with negatives, false hoods and dispair unless we make it so. Our aliveness lifts us above losses and false idenities as you have so beautifully stated here. Love, Tom B.
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Thank you always my dear sweet tomisb, for ebing more than just my mentor, and teacher of words.....
love, AngelicMistress...Tanya
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Your words are few but they say so much. I felt not only the pain but also an inner strength especially in the last stanzas...
walking tall
proud
a climax
at
the peak
culmination
of
tomorrows
without
you
Take care
Margaret
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Wow Tanya, You have penned a very heartfelt poem. I can relate to your words too. Its hard when a relationship ends that was suppose to last forever. I hope you go on and find the happiness you so deserve. Thank you for sharing this emotional poem. You take care and many blessings to you. Sandy
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oh wow this was good,but sad, good luck..mm
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Emotion comes off this piece in waves! You
did a great job of describing the pain of a
bad relationship and the hope for the future.
great job on this one. -
Thanks!
Sandy: :f
Thanks so very much for enjoying this piece of mine that came out of "life" and it's vicious cycles.
Thank you for "YOU".....
Your friend,
AngelicMistress...Tanya *hug*
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Most excellent!
Very well written with a powerful message; I like that!
All the best to you and yours!
Much love,
Sandy
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