When my husband cheated,
you were there.
When my heart was broken,
I cried to you.
When I lost my way,
you guided me.
When I didn't have a dime,
you made sure I had.
When me & my kids were hungry,
you made our favorite meal.
When I hit rock bottom,
you helped me climb back on top.
I adore you,
chrerish you,
admire you &
appreciate you.
But most of all I love you because,
you are my one & only
TRUE BEST FRIEND
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Comments
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We all could use a friend like this. I enjoyed the descriptiveness of this one. I could really feel how much you appreciate this friend. You are very lucky to have such a great friend. Nice poem and lovely dedication
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Real Best Friend
When I went to jail,
you bonded me out,
you never asked questions
or wanted to know about,
what I was doing,
when I was out on them streets,
trying to make money,
so your kids can eat.
When I came home,
bleeding from gun shots,
you didn't panic,
instead you tried to manage,
in the midst of my beef,
eventhough you couldn't sleep.
You are a real friend,
and you have always been there,
to help me through whatever,
only because you care!!!
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I feel you girl...hell, I damn feel you, keep your head up and know ALL is well
it does get better.
Im a living testimony
You should read my poem "All that I Am" or Ephiphany...Up Close and Personal.
ANyway, Im here if you need me, wonderful entry.
♥ephiphany -
I like how this was written- I almost anticipated a repetition of "You were there" from how the beginning started, but I'm glad you didn't. Nice job and good luck.
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