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.disdain

(you) mauled (my) emotions
while (i) mixed up your thoughts

the torrential drain
another wall to contain
the insipid pain
as (i) refrain
from uttering truth
once again



.n.v.

Author notes

the brackets are a metaphor for separation, i did not capitalize on purpose, etc...

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  • ErroneousSage
    January 2, 2008

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    good poem

    Of course it makes me wonder what your thoughts pertain to considering all the events youv'e taken in lately. You Mom is a magician...I understand you are 53?