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the golden tears

my hollow wishpers linger black
i save the clock that ticks to waste
and all the rusted gold there still
the golden memories told in fake
noones their to gaze the magic
as they dance round my dizzy tower
faint to be i start to drown
and you are all that matters now.

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all i know of is what i make of it.
and across what ever distance their is i send you all my love.

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  • Bazza
    November 20, 2008

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    Haunting

    This has a mystical haunting feeling to it and I loved it and hope that you keep writing and develop this budding talent.


  • PoeticAlien gold member
    April 28, 2008
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    beautiful write.