I cry for you this pain of sorrow,
my heart feels loss, there's no tomorrow.
I made you go, I did you wrong,
our relationship didn't last that long.
With my words, no give and take,
your heart I didn't want to break.
My heart now pays with love's regret,
you are the one I'll never forget.
Our time has gone, you'll never see
how much your love affected me.
Author notes
Option 4, My biggest regret in life.
A contest entry
- Act Apalled, And Listen To The Past by pillowjoe.
600 points, ended January 3, 2008, 12 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - options by burdenbytruth.
600 points, ended January 23, 2008, 26 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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wow this is amazing im absolutley in love with this. it is truly incredible. usualy i dont like short poems but this poem is actually incredible and the perfect length you did amazing and i can relate to this poem because this also sort of has to do with my biggest regret.
this is my favorite stanza
"My heart now pays with love's regret,
you are the one I'll never forget."
this just ties the whole thing together and it really hits me. thank you for entering and good luck -
this is said and it seems like you want someone back alot or just plain apollogetic to a lost love. very well written
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