I hate
the words
that pour from my mouth -
they seep into blood
flooding heart of her I hurt.
These words of uttered harm,
crucifies my precious love -
all because
of emotional flow.
My soul lies at the feet
of her that I have crushed;
I am lost and shattered,
because of uttered word.
Why is it
that her I love
is treated with words
she does not deserve?
I wish…
In a list
A contest entry
- PIF Greatest Wish by Riftkin.
600 points, ended January 9, 2008, 13 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I pray that your wish comes true. thank you and best wishes in my contest. Riftkin
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Exploring Emotions ....
and their causes and effects, often leaves one with remorse and devastated. The human nature is such that hurt overflows in the presence of safety and trust. Yet: having this freedom of expression, places a bigger responsibility in the self-disciplinary area. I could not help thinking of your "pillars" when I read this poem.
Very well expressed.
Be well Poet, and thank you for writing poetry of probing and healing.
Love
Myra
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I liked this a lot Fran,
it has a biblical touch to it for me, i love the meaning behind it and how it is personified. you really deserve to win a trophy for this one my friend.
Slán Dolores xx
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Excellent
Very touching and well done. Best of luck in the contest.
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