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The Way (meh first haiku)

The Way


Silent but deadly...
The Samurai move onward...
Until they reach home.


Brave small soldier boy...
Why do you wait in the cold?
Only to see death...

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Dedicated to my homies in Da Soldiers of 718.

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  • TheMuffinSlayer
    December 29, 2007
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    lol spur of the moment huh? Well the outlay is right i'm not that big on haiku but these are better than the one's I had to write in school


    • Queens 718 All Day
      January 4, 2008
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      XieXie Mat, so wass been up, call me tonite if u get a chance so we can catch up. much love from ya girl.