Purified feathers
Flew down from heaven
Wings of Freedom
Had always relived them
Flying through the clouds
Chirping their twilight songs
Wings of Freedom
Where they belong.
Author notes
I know you might be confused by the fourth line, it was partially my intention. I'm, btw, really 12 instead of 13... but I'll be 13 in a few months....
A contest entry
- ~ Poems about Animals~ Contest for kids up to age 13 by PinkPony.
450 points, ended January 5, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Almost Anything Goes by bloodletter68.
300 points, ended March 13, 2008, 132 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Was there any meaning to this poem in your eyes?
Comments
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Great Poem!
I like this poem.Good Luck in the contest! -
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Thanks!
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WOW A really smart poem here...
You should keep a scrapbook of your poems and be sure to put this one in it. It's really GOOD!
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Thank you. And I actually do, btw, I'm up to my second book!
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