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Stardust Love

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The stars shined so bright
as the world sparkled in stardust,
words of beauty fall in love
bring comfort to all she touches,

a sister, a friend found,
rising out of the ash
of love and lose turning dark
to light and hope
touching my soul with her affection,

         thus I would never be alone
         or lost again.

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Stardust-luvr http://allpoetry.com/Stardust-luvr

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  • Tam gold member
    December 29, 2007

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    my beautiful sis...

    I love you...
    your heart touches so many souls with your talented amazing ink...
    how beautiful I find you...
    you have painted a lovely soul within your poetry...
    time and again you capture and share your visions with such elegance and grace...as only you can...
    I am honored to even witness the kind and loving example you display...
    I am better for knowing and loving you...
    what a sweetheart she is indeed...I know your words touched her so deeply!
    love you to the moon and back!
    sis
    xoxoxox


  • Stardust-luvr
    December 29, 2007

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    My dear sister you have graced me once again with the beauty from your incredible spirit. I am in tears from the love I have for you as you know I am one who is empowered to make sure everyone else is in pure joy and happiness and with peace before my own self last. thank you for your infinite joy you give me as well as your love and friendship. Much love forever always xoxoxooxoxox


  • Lexie - gold member
    December 29, 2007
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    simply beautiful


  • Grey Mouser
    December 29, 2007

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    Incredibly moving honoring of this blessed soul. Her heart is immense filling all with her special grace and tender loving care. She tends to those in need with amazing passion. You have done very well in granting this lady a tribute of feeling, many thanks for entering into the contest.
    Be well and be blessed,
    Mouser