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How come the one I want....

It's you that I want,
but sadly you've got no time for me-
you hold the key for my
joy of happiness in being in love,
yet you always find a way
of crushing my hopes.
You appear periodically,
then leave in silence
i'm left to crawl,
trying to tape up broken pictures.
Pictures of you in my arms,
kissing me like there was no tomorrow,
how I thought you loved me.

Unrequited over and over again

from you, when will I learn?

I'm too weak for your touch,

I got to gather the strength

to tell myself, "no more,"

only then will I be free!

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  • nell
    December 30, 2007
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    A feeling that many of us share, sometimes its easier to hold on to something weve had because we know it, felt it instead of embracing whats to come, whos out there waiting, as my mum says "never frown when youre down, cuz you never know whos falling in love with your smile' great poem hun

    shanelle


  • NurseChilly gold member
    December 30, 2007

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    I'm sure you'll find the right girl Curtis and when you do, it will be so good

    just be you and your heart will be filled




  • sidewinder silver member
    December 29, 2007

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    thy words touch in pain from one's own broken heart...
    yet one must remember... how does one find love without taking a risk?

    Keep penning on one stroke at a time!
    Bill