go on sit down
in these gas vapors to drown
open up you mouth
i can tell you'r from the south
oops wrong mixture
you cant move, still like a fixture
you still feel though and that's all i need
cant believe you've committed this deed
i know yours is the tongue of a liar
i cut it out, the pain exquisite with desire
i know yours are the eyes of a liar
i tear them out the sockets
they burn like fire
i know yours are the ears of a liar
i take my syringe and Pierce the drums,
no more will you be a spire
you don't deserve to live
make more holes in you than a siv
don't worry
safe in your home
just a dream
but don't think that I can't find you
the monster is free
waiting for you
to go where you punch in you time
i know your a liar and i'll cut out your tongue
Author notes
option 3 hatefull
A contest entry
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Comments
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the rhyme is forced & you need a spell check...
but it's still good.
thanks
xx Sin -
thats cool but scary poem is this about anyone in piticular or is it just a poem. cuz i want to know who made you so mad that you had to write a poem with this much haterd and feelings behind it makes me almost sad for you.
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not bad
i accuatly felt the fear in this poem. keep up the good wor and thanks for entering my contest. -
okay so this poem was fantastic.
but it could just be the fact that im in a good mood that i liked it so much.
GURGLE!
hargle har har.
man, i need a smoke.
DUDE IM 18 NOW SO I DONT HAVE TO BEG PEOPLE TO BUY THEM FOR ME! kick ass.
well i'll catch ya later.
GURGLE!
hargle har har.
woah.
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WHOA.....
This is very well written and
heh....i can DEFNITELY TELL the amount of intense anger and disdain you've got behind these words.
Just......wow......
*cowers underneath a bed*
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haha
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